Results:Okay, first of all: all the fics are great! It was very hard judging these fics and as you can see in the scoresheets below, some came in pretty close. Please don't let the results discourage you from writing! They are all great and what I'm stating is just my opinion.
Okay, onward to the scores...
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Nickylovertje - If Your Heart's Not In It:First of all: great choice. This song has a great plot and I love what you've done with it.
Rules - 5/5 points:You didn't break any rules (not that I'd expected that
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), so full points for you!
Plot - 20/20 points:Kaching! I gave you the maximum because you deserve it. You staid very true with the song and I think this fic describes the story behind the song beautifully.
Lyrics - 10/15 points:You use pieces of the lyrics throughout the whole fic as things they say or things she feels and that's great. There are some sentences that feel a bit weird and unnatural to say though.
Grammar/Spelling - 5/10 points:Sorry, but I'm very nit-picky if it comes to grammar and spelling. A few spelling/grammar-mistakes and forgetting to use capital letters.
Bonus - 5/10 points:It was pretty dramatic, a real tear-jerker. So 5 points for making me want to cry.
Total: 45/60----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
davesgirl - Nothing Is Impossible:Very original choice! I didn't realise the fic potential of this song.
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It's a very sweet fic.
Rules - 5/5 points:You didn't break any rules. Bravo!
Plot - 15/20 points:The fic got the message 'When it comes to love, nothing is impossible' across, but it didn't really explain why it was impossible for them to be together. If you'd explained it a bit more and added a bit about the first verse of the song which you let out of the fic completely it would've been perfect.
Lyrics - 8/15 points:Uhm, some of the lyrics are a bit unnatural for someone to say. Like: "Just walk down that road again, it's coming back to me, I still love you so much." It would've been better if you'd changed it into something more normal. But the use of the rest of the lyrics was fine.
Grammar/Spelling - 5/10 points:Same as Sandra. Grammar mistakes and forgetting to use capital letters.
Bonus - 2/10 points:2 points for originality.
Total: 35/60----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
rockinangel - I Did It For You:Oh, I'm surprised it isn't about Mark.
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It's a great fic. Reminds me a bit of Ces's books.
Rules - 5/5 points:5 points for not breaking any rules.
Plot - 15/20 points:Interesting, original plot. It describes the message of the song, but I think it could've been more 'powerful'. It's a pretty powerful song with the
And I had no choice, no
It was something that I believed
A dream that was driving me
A fire inside of meLyrics - 10/15 points:You chose to not use the lyrics directly (as in things characters say), but to just paste them in or letting them listen to it on the radio. I think this fits more with the fic. It would've been weird if someone said for example: "And I had no choice, no."
Grammar/Spelling - 8/10 points:The usual capital letters and spelling/grammar-mistakes.
Bonus - 10/10 points:I love your writing style and the funny bits in this fic. I gave you full points because your story is really detailed as well. It's like the story behind the story behind the song, if you get my meaning. (I don't blame ya if you don't..
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)
Total: 48/60----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
So the winner is... CINDY! Congrats hun!
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